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Brad Davis's avatar

Slain by the slant (and the reach) rhyme! It's the sort of formal music I enjoy most. Finding it is part of the fun of reading. Perfect rhyme too often hurts my ears, and I get distracted by trying to guess what rhyming word comes next and how the syntax will inevitably (and awkwardly) get inverted to land on it. I don’t enjoy such distraction. Enjoyable is reading the poem through (unsuspecting) and only then discovering the more subtle music and sense of the thing. Thanks!

Michele Sharpe's avatar

These poems hit home for me today, Syd. Thank you for sharing them.

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